Sunday, December 16, 2018

My toy car


Age: 7
Birthday: 2 July 2011

I love my toy car because I got it for my 2nd birthday and have had it ever since. My toy car is as blue as a diamond and has red and orange streaks mixed together which looks like a grapefruit on the sides.  The car feels like metal found in a gold mine.
It’s as smooth as a marble bench .

My toy car has been through a lot. Once I threw it at my sister and she chucked it out the window. On another occasion, it rolled down the driveway  and it flipped and flopped crazily as it went. It took me a long time to find it swishing and swooshing through the bushes.

Now it just lives in the box in my room, deep in my cupboard.  It has heaps of scratches and looks old and worn. I have never used it since because I now find it boring.  I prefer to play on my computer or go and play sport.





Sunday, December 9, 2018

Junk mail


WALT:Write a prediction for what a story might be based on


Lili and Ana were sisters and they both were sick of each other.  DING, DONG! It was the mailman and he handed us the mail took out the mail and left the buggy in the street with the brakes on and delivered the mail. When lili got the mail she got mad because she didn't get the letter she needed so she couldn't pay for a scholarship wich made her lose her job



WALT: Evaluate our prediction of the story after reading it ( Junk mail by Prue Hilson,pt 3,no.3 1995

I give my story a 0/10 I predicted nothing correct and everything wrong.It was  actually Ana delivering Lilis mail and Ana didn't do a good job and got lili fired