Junk mail

WALT:Write a prediction for what a story might be based on

Lili and Ana were sisters and they both were sick of each other.  DING, DONG! It was the mailman and he handed us the mail took out the mail and left the buggy in the street with the brakes on and delivered the mail. When lili got the mail she got mad because she didn't get the letter she needed so she couldn't pay for a scholarship wich made her lose her job

WALT: Evaluate our prediction of the story after reading it ( Junk mail by Prue Hilson,pt 3,no.3 1995

I give my story a 0/10 I predicted nothing correct and everything wrong.It was  actually Ana delivering Lilis mail and Ana didn't do a good job and got lili fired