The day I traded 100 dollars for a cheeseburger at Mcdonalds

I am trying to entertain the audience and use dialogue 

The day I traded 100 dollars for a cheeseburger at Mcdonalds

Mmmmmmm, this cheeseburger is delicious oh didn’t realize you were there I should take you back to the very beginning.  

“Hey, Daniel do you want to get McDonald’s?” Asked Tim 

“Ok,” said Daniel 

“Let’s go then,” Demanded Tim

At  McDonald’s both Tim and Daniel wanted cheeseburgers but there was only one cheeseburger and one fillet,o, fish.  They went into an auction for the cheeseburger it started at 1$ then 2$ then 3$ all the way up to 98$ dollars and Daniel had 1 dollar left and the bid went to 99$ and Daniel was out of money so Tim put one more dollar for fun to make it to 100$ for a cheeseburger. 

“So now you are all caught up with me,” said Tim taking the last bite of his cheeseburger.

When the two boys got home his little sister asked for ten dollars to get new rubbers for school but the two boys were all out of money so they couldn’t give her money.  When Mary didn’t get the money she got furious.

“WHAT DID YOU TO BOZOS SPEND ALL YOUR MONEY ON!!!!!!!” 

“A cheeseburger from McDonald’s,” said the two boys scaredly 

“Wait until mum finds out you idiots will get in so much trouble,” she said furiously.

When mary told mum she was infuriated and demanded the boys to her immediately and it was not a good sight but I will tell you anyway

“TIM what did you do with all your life savings,” said mum

“I spent it at McDonald’s,” he quivered 

“WHY?” shouted mum

“We both wanted a cheeseburger,” said Tim

“both of you to your room now, you are grounded” exclaimed mum

“Here is 10 dollars for your rubbers and an extra 15 for some for food,” mum said to mary