Thursday, August 1, 2019

The tree hut description

JACK
It was dark, cold and scary and the air was dirty. The fog was thick and you could barely see.  

The hut was unstable and very eerie. It was made out of logs and was filled with termites.  The door was creaky and some of the logs were falling off. The wood felt scratchy, bumpy and rocky.  it smelled dirty like trash from a garbage truck. It was as dark and scary as if you were put in a room with your SCARIEST NIGHTMARE. 

The trees stood tall like soldiers standing guard they go on and on until it hits darkness. The leaves are like parachuters jumping out of a plane.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Jack. Next time work on describing how you felt in the story

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